How to make writing more emphatic

The way you make your writing more emphatic is to make sure that you have done your research and make sure you know what your are talking about. If you don't do your research on a topic , then you are not clear on what you are writing on , so how can you convince or tell someone else about the topic? It is very important that you are always clear in your writing because you do not want your audience to be confused on your topic.

Roles Of Guns in America

Guns play a huge role in American culture. Whether they are used for hunting , protection , or anything else , they are used daily in America. Guns have become a big issue in American society ,because all people don't use them for the correct things. A lot of people have died over the use of guns over the past few years. Our current President tried to make new gun laws , but they were not very successful because everyone did not agree with the way he went about it. Personally, I don't like guns and I never have , but as long as people know how to use them, and what to use them for , then everything would be fine and there would not be as many issues with guns as there are today.

Conflict With Family

I love my family more than anything on this earth, but like any family we always have some sort of problem. I am the type of person who likes their personal space and I can't stand for someone to tap on my shoulder repeatedly or something repeatedly. My brother and my daddy both know this , but yet they still like to get in my face and tap me. So the other day , my daddy got in my face and started tapping me on my shoulder and he got in my face when I really didn't want to be bothered. So I yelled so loud that he jumped and walked away.  When my daddy left , I decided to lay down and take a nap. About fifteen minuets after I fell asleep , I felt someone tapping me on my shoulder and I looked up to see my brother in my face and he yells , " Hey Eri!" and then runs off. I guess my family conflict will never be solved.

Relationships with Family

" I do not know if  I will ever physically carry my father as he has carried me, though I fear that someday I may have that responsibility." As we age, we tend to forget that are parents age as well. The writer expressed of how the physical relationship changed from when he was younger to when he was older.  He went from always wanting to beat his father , when he finally had the opportunity , he just couldn't do it. He began to realize that his father was becoming weaker and one day he may have to take care of his father the same way his father took care of him.

Colleague's Wikipedia Topic

My colleague Tatiana is doing her Wikipedia project over becoming an OBGYN. She has learned lots of new things over her topic that she didn't know about in the beginning. "I learned many things about my Wikipedia topic. It enhanced my knowledge even more about my major and the career I would like to pursue." My colleague Maya is doing her project over Fashion Merchandising and she has learned a lot about the industry as well. "I learned that in fashion merchandising , fashion buyers do way more than just buying and selling clothing." Both of these topics are great topics to write on and I hope both of my colleagues get a good grade.

Best Info about Wikipedia Article

The best information that I have learned about beauty salons is that have been around for centuries.They weren't like the beauty salons we have today, but they were considered salons because people did hair in them. The information I have found in my readings are interesting , but this was the most interesting  because I didn't know hairdressing has been around this long.  " The profession of hairdressing dates back to ancient Egypt, where hairdressers decorated their cases to keep tools, scissors, lotions and other styling materials."   

The profession of hair dressing dates back to ancient Egypt, where hairdressers decorated their cases to keep tools, scissors, lotions and other styling materials. - See more at: http://www.curioushistory.com/the-rise-of-hair-salons-through-the-ages/#sthash.ObGHFOVh.dpuf

The profession of hair dressing dates back to ancient Egypt, where hairdressers decorated their cases to keep tools, scissors, lotions and other styling materials. - See more at: http://www.curioushistory.com/the-rise-of-hair-salons-through-the-ages/#sthash.ObGHFOVh.dpuf

The profession of hair dressing dates back to ancient Egypt, where hairdressers decorated their cases to keep tools, scissors, lotions and other styling materials. - See more at: http://www.curioushistory.com/the-rise-of-hair-salons-through-the-ages/#sthash.ObGHFOVh.dpuf

Classmates Posts

In my classmates Sierra Smith's post , she stated that " Women stereotypes are worse then Men stereotypes" , and I couldn't agree more! Women are stereotyped in many different ways ,while men can only be stereotyped to a certain extent , but it is a different case for a woman.
(http://siesmith.blogspot.com/)
In my classmates Willie Ramsey's post , he talks about MLA and APA format and he stated "MLA and APA are some of the most common ways writers format their paper" and I MLA and APA is the form that most papers a re written in. I chose these two because we sit right beside each other in class, and they also have great posts!

Wikipedia Article

What I have learned so far about my topic is that beauty salons have evolved dramatically since the first one started. Beauty Salons used to be just for cosmetic care or spa days. Today in beauty salons you can get your hair done , nails , feet , and you maybe able to even get some type of spa treatment depending on what the owner decides to have in their salon. Beauty salons definitely differ in today's time compared to how they were back when they first started. 

Effective Introduction

The thing that makes an effective introduction to a Wikipedia article is a strong thesis. The thesis statement is the point you are trying to make or the reason you are writing the paper. A strong thesis will bring together everything you need for your introduction and for the entire paper. Your introduction is a vital part of your paper because it sets up the rest of your paper , therefore you need to have a strong thesis statement.

Wikipedia Article

First let me start by saying that I had to change my article once again ! I changed it to an article about the Beauty Salon , since I know a lot of women are passionate about their hair. I organized my article so that it will tell about the history of the beauty salons , the different hairstyles of different times , and some of the different beauty salons and hairstyles in today's time. This is the best way to organize the article because it will so how things have changed dramatically in the Hair Care Industry.

Men and Women Stereotypes

Men and women both have stereotypes about each other , but in my opinion , the way men stereotype women is worse.  Many women are taught at an early age to help around the house so they can help out their mothers or whoever takes care of them. Some men think all a woman is supposed to do is cook , clean , and take care of all of the household duties. That's not right at all , a woman does have certain things she needs to do around the house , but she is not meant to be treated as a slave! A woman does have some household chores that need to be taken care of , but that doesn't mean a man can't help her out. This is just one of the many stereotypes men have about women.

Humor In A Strange Situation

As many of you know I am a very friendly person and I love to laugh , so I can find humor in almost any situation. For instance , My Nana and Papa are having their 50th Wedding Anniversary in a few weeks and their children are planning the Vow Renewal Ceremony. My Nana wants her Grandchildren to be in it , but some of her children think its best if we are not in it. I was asked if I was upset because I wasn't going to be in the ceremony , I simply replied , " No, I am still getting my hair and nails done so I am perfectly fine." Everyone around the table laughed and we continue to enjoy our Sunday. 

Wiki Readings

First let me start off by saying that I had to change my topic from Pointe shoes to an article about a product everyone knows well , the flat iron. In my readings I have found that the flat iron was invented earlier than some may think. It has evolved in many ways now. They have invented many new forms of the flat iron , such as the wand , and even flat irons with brushes in them. I'm  glad to able to write on this topic , because it is something many women use daily.